Sleeping Valor

I finished the rought version of the 'original' Kidnapped and started typing it (because I realized there were flaws and wanted some YWS feedback!) up. There's only 2 chapters (short, ...

I will try not to. I will leave grammar to someone else, and instead comment on the style and characters. 1) What are these people like? We can tell Mollie ...

Plot Lara has just moved to a new town when she's kidnapped by a bunch of drunk youths. It was supposed to be a prank, just to scare her a ...

Methinks that there isn't enough power in a cellphone to kill. Also, I don't think the danger is the same. Any device that needs to be plugged in the work ...

*hunts for the other post she did with all the stuff* Fantasy DoaV Prologue Part 1: DoaV Prologue Part 2: Romance Kidnapped C1: Kidnapped C2: Random, good fun Hollow Lake ...

Yes, I think your noise is a bit too pointed for a wolf. =P Also, I think you could add some more fur, since wolves are covered in it but ...

Some people wait for a warm day, then shovel the snow unto the road so it melts faster. Otherwise, it depends on the wether. Rain & heat get rid of ...

Fantasy DoaV Prologue Part 1: DoaV Prologue Part 2: Romance Kidnapped C1: Kidnapped C2: Random, good fun Hollow Lake 1: Hollow Lake 2: I'm not asking you to review all ...

Thanks everybody! XD No time (o.O Soo....tired....) to respond to each and every critique, but I've read them and I apreciate all your advice and feedback. ^_^ It's very helpful ...

o.O There are no words. That's....just.... =_=

=P I think I got most of it. Thanks for the feedback. *was sure this had vanished into the depths of the forum* I will try and work on my ...

lol! XD The funny thing about the humor, is that it's entirely ad-libbed. I was typing up the original and decided I didn't like the way it went (girl had ...

Ok, I know you said no romance, but right now 'Kidnapped' hasn't got any romance happening yet (just plot and character development, really). Plus, due to the fact my early ...

*bows* Thanks for reading. It's been fun. ^_^ Keek out!

^_^ Taking a break while DoaV skills come to me, and typing up a story from earlier this year. It's a romance, and needs all the love it can get. ...